Maybe Anonymous decided his college days would be different and took advantage of the fresh start. I didn't have any specific reason in mind while writing I do think there are threads one can grasp at throughout, though. The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked: who can know it? It also seemed like there wasn't much reason given for why Anon is so in to Moonie. On a final note, nice job with the pudding at the end. He might have gotten his career anyway, but he'll be so much happier having a stallion to come home to and cuddle and fuck. Too many stories just have two ponies meet and go 'whoosh, my dick is in your butthole now.' This one goes to the trouble of showing that Moonie needs another pony, and that Anon can be that pony. Even if you clean out, you still need a lot of lube and it gets messy and nasty.īut, in the end, these two do be pretty cute. It's fine if he's just a simp, but you gotta tell us that.Īnd I'm sorry, but doing buttstuff in the library is just gross. He goes to a whole lot of effort to be friends before they even really know each other. You have to be careful with that kind of stuff. Moondancer was also a dick, but he's the protagonist so we start out biased towards him. In those first chapters he really had the asshole dial turned up high. I'm glad that Anon mellowed out over the course of the story.
